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Deviousness `TimberClipse's dedication to our community is without question. From developing helpful tutorials, to being a community leader in groups such as #fella and #deviant365, you can always find Zev connecting with all areas of our community in order to spread his infectious enthusiasm and inspiring positivity. We are delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2012 to `TimberClipse, congratulations! Read More
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The face on the standing man is very nicely done. It's hardest to get the proportions right when the face is head-on. Nice hair too. I think the fingers on his right hand need a slight adjustment: hooking my fingers over my own arm to check, the fingers all are positioned slightly differently -- in particular, only one knuckle of the pinky is visible when two knuckles of the other three fingers are showing. In fact, the positioning of that arm seems unnatural.
The face on the seated man is off -- his left eye is too close to the bridge of his nose, and is shaped differently from his right eye.
The background is lovely and appropriate. You obviously spent a lot of attention on the tux too, with good effect.
I'd like to give you a higher technique score based on the face/head of the standing man, but I'm taking off for the things I've noted above -- because I know that you have been drawing regularly for years and I have seen what you're capable of, I'm a little more strict with critiques for you. ^_^
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